My new custom story - The Visitor

[HumiliatioN]

(07-20-2011 05:55 PM)DRedshot Wrote:  ok ill tell you what to do, since youre stuck

Spoiler below!

Ok, so first, i'm not sure exactly what you have done. if you have a chemical called 'Aqueous Mixture' then all is good, there is no bugs, and the solution is simple: go to 'the corridors' solve the mechanism puzzle in the third room on the left, (you must get the top and bottom to equal 9) enter that room, pick up the container. Go into the far room on the left, put the chem container in the machine, put the container at the end, and voila! you have your chemical. If you dont have Aqueous mixture, im sorry but you have found a bug! i will fix it soon.

Tell me that "mechanicm sequence" because I tried everything and too lazy to begin start If i download that new version. What I put down and up?

[DRedshot]

(07-20-2011 06:16 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  

(07-20-2011 05:55 PM)DRedshot Wrote:  ok ill tell you what to do, since youre stuck

Spoiler below!

Ok, so first, i'm not sure exactly what you have done. if you have a chemical called 'Aqueous Mixture' then all is good, there is no bugs, and the solution is simple: go to 'the corridors' solve the mechanism puzzle in the third room on the left, (you must get the top and bottom to equal 9) enter that room, pick up the container. Go into the far room on the left, put the chem container in the machine, put the container at the end, and voila! you have your chemical. If you dont have Aqueous mixture, im sorry but you have found a bug! i will fix it soon.

Tell me that "mechanicm sequence" because I tried everything and too lazy to begin start If i download that new version. What I put down and up?

ok here it is

Spoiler below!

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that might not be right though, try

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[HumiliatioN]

(07-20-2011 06:32 PM)DRedshot Wrote:  

(07-20-2011 06:16 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  

(07-20-2011 05:55 PM)DRedshot Wrote:  ok ill tell you what to do, since youre stuck

Spoiler below!

Ok, so first, i'm not sure exactly what you have done. if you have a chemical called 'Aqueous Mixture' then all is good, there is no bugs, and the solution is simple: go to 'the corridors' solve the mechanism puzzle in the third room on the left, (you must get the top and bottom to equal 9) enter that room, pick up the container. Go into the far room on the left, put the chem container in the machine, put the container at the end, and voila! you have your chemical. If you dont have Aqueous mixture, im sorry but you have found a bug! i will fix it soon.

Tell me that "mechanicm sequence" because I tried everything and too lazy to begin start If i download that new version. What I put down and up?

ok here it is

Spoiler below!

down down up up down up

that might not be right though, try

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Its right thanks..

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Oh yeah I completed it.

Now my feedback!

Spoiler below!

Very suprising gameplay and atmosphere, Fantastic story.

Story: 8/10
Design: 9/10
Puzzles 9/10
Atmosphere 10/10 VERY GOOD!
Overall not the best story. But one of my favouritest easily!

This is my favouritest map so far.

First of all you did great job that begin and lighting was very nice and atmospheric.

Second: I liked that mansion very good design and scared many times.

Third: Hub was awesome and beautiful, good old times from amnesia. That new monster too I have that too in my custom story.

Fourth: Scares was very goodly maded not so many and don't ruined atmosphere and terrifying moments. Everything was timed right.

For the puzzles... Very nice that pushing rocks on the mansion to get next area, and that mechanism was hard but nice too.. Mixing chemicals very smart and take some time to think what next to do. Clues was fine.

For the scares best was that "Ritual thing" I jumped and screamed when that corpse starts to float. and disappeared.. and that cellar "Silent monster" srsly! That was creepy as hell... My scariest moment where I searched items and stuff and circle around that cellar then "When I came same room third time and opened door there was that monster right front of me. I jumped and screamed like a little girl and.... Just too scary for me! Amazing job dude!!

Make next project soon... You have some skills...

Ps: One bug I found and jumped out of map... Where that "Fog monster spawns" behind that door Is unlocked mansion door and there is "out of the map enter way xD" Fix this and it's fine then

[DRedshot]

Thanks a lot for the feedback, I really appreciated it xD you have motivated me to make another! I'll start on it after a bit of a break, because i've spent a good couple of months on this! im glad you enjoyed it, and im not surprised that the actual story wasn't the best bit. I'm glad i scared you haha, and my next story will have a nice deep story. - And I will fix that door right now!

[HumiliatioN]

(07-20-2011 07:02 PM)DRedshot Wrote:  Thanks a lot for the feedback, I really appreciated it xD you have motivated me to make another! I'll start on it after a bit of a break, because i've spent a good couple of months on this! im glad you enjoyed it, and im not surprised that the actual story wasn't the best bit. I'm glad i scared you haha, and my next story will have a nice deep story. - And I will fix that door right now!

You're welcome one word: Sick story

[Dark Knight]

(07-20-2011 06:32 PM)DRedshot Wrote:  

Spoiler below!

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that might not be right though, try

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OMG just finished it, cellar part with two chemicals was amazing!
puzzles was kinda hard.
right combo is:

Spoiler below!

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[Zambo]

Hey dude, i was just playing your story but whenever i use 1 substance on the bucket, it just contains no water and i cant really progress, any idea what should i do?

[Dark Knight]

Zambo
amigo, i combine 2 parts + water, and get one bottle mixture , so use it on the mixing machine.
no bugs noticed.

Spoiler below!

Aqueous Mixture

[Zambo]

(07-20-2011 10:12 PM)Dark Knight Wrote:  Zambo
amigo, i combine 2 parts + water, and get one bottle mixture , so use it on the mixing machine.
no bugs noticed.

Spoiler below!

Aqueous Mixture

Alright then, but as i said i cant find or get any water, where do i get the water?

[DRedshot]

you find the water

Spoiler below!

in the corridors, opposite the lab