Top scariest moments

[Morfar]

Hey guys

Have a question, i have done a playthrough on Youtube and it got more popular than i expected, might be because i get shit scared and i use a webcam (the last 5 parts of the playtrough)

Anyways, now when im done im going to do small videos called top scariest moments where i take the best parts from the series

Like so : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rg7y3KTjzc4

What do you guys think? What can i improve upon?

Many thanks
Morfar