"Hunted" Custom Story (News)

[Mr. Bombastic]

NEWS: I am working on my 2nd Custom Story, with story-line and all that stuff that wasn't well made in my first!

No Name for now: 20% Finished
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So, this is my first Custom Story after long time learning to understand the scripts functions and stuff..
Please after you played it, tell me what you think about it and what i could do better.
It was really hard work and i think i did well, i hope..

Also if you see some flaws or what i could edit, comment
IF you vote for average or bad, at least TELL ME what i could do better! :C

Here is the download link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?2m8krlb8d6fxodo

For those who prefer watching it or don't want to play it, here is the walkthrough video:




Thank you and have fun(fear)

[xtron]

well it made me fear quit XD. I didn't get the chance to meet a monster before I quit.
It had some good scares . Great job.

[Mr. Bombastic]

(07-25-2011 05:20 PM)xtron Wrote:  well it made me fear quit XD. I didn't get the chance to meet a monster before I quit.
It had some good scares . Great job.

Haha, really? xD
Good to hear that, i thought the scares were pretty.. unscary, but thank you

[HumiliatioN]

Very enjoyable story but it's short but well done!

I didn't see any bugs anywhere every map has good scares and decent design.

Nice one ! Jumped few times.

[Rapture]

Not bad, the darkness made me jumpy at times.

When you juke the monster and are going to the exit door. Their should be more guardian sounds and the monster should start chasing you as your trying to run for the door.

[Mr. Bombastic]

(07-26-2011 12:31 AM)Rapture Wrote:  Not bad, the darkness made me jumpy at times.

Spoiler below!

When you juke the monster and are going to the exit door. Their should be more guardian sounds and the monster should start chasing you as your trying to run for the door.

Thanks, uuh thats one good idea, i will edit that when i`ve got time.

[Mr. Bombastic]

Come on guys, if you vote for average or bad, please tell me how to do better! Is that so hard? :C

[Dark Knight]

Good story.

[skypeskype]

(07-26-2011 12:31 AM)Rapture Wrote:  Not bad, the darkness made me jumpy at times.

When you juke the monster and are going to the exit door. Their should be more guardian sounds and the monster should start chasing you as your trying to run for the door.

Put this in a spoiler box !!!!

[Tenno]

I voted for average because, while the atmosphere was good, the scares felt a bit too cliche, there wasn't really a storyline and it was a little short. The only advice I can give is try different, unique ideas and make it longer.

It has the potential to be great for sure, good luck