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Hello : ) I am currently Working on a Custom Story Called "Order of the Eagle" It will be my second Custom Story Released.


"Your Name is Tom Twinkleberg, in the year 1811. After a hard day at work you are traveling home, but suddenly you get struck down. After some hours you wake up in a forest and you need to find somewhere safe to stay. After a while you stumble upon a Trapdoor, you carefully open it and climb down. At the bottom you find yourself inside a dusty and old hallway, and then your andventure begins."

Yeah i know : D I'm not really good at creating a story. I think it's the hardest part by making a custom story.



What is the Order of the Eagle:

The Order of the Eagle is a organization that wants to kill everyone that does not believe in a deity. They hired a Necromancer to fulfill this wish and free the world of nonbelievers. The Necromancer created two horrifying beasts that was available to chop a person in two and chop them to pieces. After some weeks of testing the beasts, they managed to escape and kill everyone in the organization. (you will learn more about them when the custom story is released.)

Sorry for my English.

The custom story will probably contain 5-6 maps when finished. and it will probably be finished in some weeks.


Pictures:
http://imgur.com/kLQA1
http://imgur.com/HMoyO
http://imgur.com/okzkY (The Flail model wasn't made by me)
http://imgur.com/CJXI3
http://imgur.com/oMsRT

I will add some better Pictures later!

Do the knights bash you with their shields?

The story doesn't sound bad at all, its where you take it that makes the difference. The screens look good and I wish you the best of luck with this project, also I laughed when I read the character's name, Tom Twinkleberg

Isn't the order of the eagle the group alexander was in in the main game? If I'm correct about that, you could tie the story from the main game into this quite nicely

(09-05-2011, 09:28 PM)Rapture Wrote: [ -> ]Do the knights bash you with their shields?

Maybe, maybe not..

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(09-06-2011, 06:42 AM)Tenno Wrote: [ -> ]The story doesn't sound bad at all, its where you take it that makes the difference. The screens look good and I wish you the best of luck with this project, also I laughed when I read the character's name, Tom Twinkleberg

Thank you very much =)

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(09-06-2011, 07:22 AM)kman Wrote: [ -> ]Isn't the order of the eagle the group alexander was in in the main game? If I'm correct about that, you could tie the story from the main game into this quite nicely

Sadly i don't think was is, but it would've be awesome if he was.

(09-06-2011, 07:22 AM)kman Wrote: [ -> ]Isn't the order of the eagle the group alexander was in in the main game? If I'm correct about that, you could tie the story from the main game into this quite nicely

Sadly i don't think was is, but it would've be awesome if he was.


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So I looked it up, he was in the order of the BLACK eagle. But anyways, this story looks very nice, looking forward to it!

Sounds great and the screenshots were good. I cant wait to play it : D

(09-06-2011, 02:57 PM)kman Wrote: [ -> ]

(09-06-2011, 07:22 AM)kman Wrote: [ -> ]Isn't the order of the eagle the group alexander was in in the main game? If I'm correct about that, you could tie the story from the main game into this quite nicely

Sadly i don't think was is, but it would've be awesome if he was.

So I looked it up, he was in the order of the BLACK eagle. But anyways, this story looks very nice, looking forward to it!


Yeah, I believe Wilhelm was in the Black Eagle as well, Thanks =)

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(09-06-2011, 05:17 PM)TheKataKombs Wrote: [ -> ]Sounds great and the screenshots were good. I cant wait to play it : D

Thanks! I am glad you liked em' =)

pardon me, but is this based on the "order of the black eagle" at all, because if it is, well... lets just say, i do not approve... >>

(09-07-2011, 11:41 PM)zeravia Wrote: [ -> ]pardon me, but is this based on the "order of the black eagle" at all, because if it is, well... lets just say, i do not approve... >>

No it's not.