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Hey guys, this is my third map I have ever made. BUT, this is my first serious one. Now I've included a storyline and put a fair amount of scares in. This is a Series, I will be releasing the maps as I make them.

Story: You are Prisoner #345. You have no idea what happened, or can you remember how you got there. You were a prisoner for a while. But when things went to lock down the whole prison for some reason, evacuated and stranded.Oddly enough you were sleeping at the time! You now how to navigate a way through the silent prison, in order to get out. How will you do this? And more importantly... why did the prison go into lock down?

Download (Level 1,2,3,4 and 5): http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZUGLU68F

IF YOU DIE, START THE GAME AGAIN!


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*DONT READ SPOILERS BELOW!!!!* >

Looks and sounds nice

(10-17-2011, 12:55 PM)Unearthlybrutal Wrote: [ -> ]Looks and sounds nice

Thanks

Some nice scares the best scare was on the ladder when the man spawns

but i see texture bugs and not so well build's the ceiling was not on the walls

and i dont know there was a maps one called Redemption of Souls_DEMO and the other Redemption_DEMO

what's the right ?

i played Redemption_DEMO

well then , played Redemption_DEMO

nice, but catch a bug - at the end of level, there are room , in which you locked tight and only 3 walls near your.
tried to jump out - and i jump over the map and died


no fear, no story. wtf???

Dark night. Yeh i know..... i was counting on people actually using the lever instead of jumping down!

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(10-17-2011, 05:42 PM)devin413 Wrote: [ -> ]but i see texture bugs and not so well build's the ceiling was not on the walls

and i dont know there was a maps one called Redemption of Souls_DEMO and the other Redemption_DEMO

what's the right ?

i played Redemption_DEMO

DUDE! Put your comment as a spoiler!!!!

Redemption demo is right, i just changed the name of it because it didn't exactly fit. Just click on custom stories and click start. Im not sure if Redemption of souls_demo actually loads the next map.

Sounds good! I'll try it out tomorrow and share my opinion!

(10-17-2011, 06:35 PM)Dark Knight Wrote: [ -> ]well then , played Redemption_DEMO

nice, but catch a bug - at the end of level, there are room , in which you locked tight and only 3 walls near your.
tried to jump out - and i jump over the map and died


no fear, no story. wtf???

What do you mean? is this talking about the lever room? or another part of the level? And download again, i added to more levels, probs making another one today!

(10-17-2011, 10:05 PM)keeshond5 Wrote: [ -> ]Sounds good! I'll try it out tomorrow and share my opinion!

Thanks!

Ironically, there are no redeemable qualities about this map. The scares are bland and completely random. Screamers are really no fun. The actual makeup of the map is awful. It is ridiculously easy to break the map. Without even trying I would just be pushed through a wall which killed the experience. Tonnes of Z-Fighting created extreme lag, and there was little story involved. I didn't even understand what I was doing half the time. I got to the part where you fall down into some random hallway where wardrobes were continuously spawning. There was literally nothing I could do so I'm just going to assume that was the end.

Mediocre at best, and that would be complimenting it. 2.5/10