Nightmare's End (Short Demo)
Hey guys,
this is my new custom story, Nightmare's End!
Please know that there's still many things to do to the custom story.
Like detailing the map more and adding sounds and music!
But anyways enjoy!
Downloaded, and am going to play right away. I've got this window open, so I can write my thoughts as I go along through this mod.
Spoiler below!
- I understand that this mod needs more work, but I'll give suggestions nonetheless!
- I'd recommend some sort of intro, as opposed to be dropped right into the map.
- Statue movement. Creepy.
- BAD ANGEL, BAD
- Ending is slightly cliche
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Well, when you said short, you meant short. Some improvements could be made, of course, but you're working on that. Keep it up.
(11-05-2011, 08:39 PM)Obliviator27 Wrote: [ -> ]Downloaded, and am going to play right away. I've got this window open, so I can write my thoughts as I go along through this mod.
Spoiler below!
- I understand that this mod needs more work, but I'll give suggestions nonetheless!
- I'd recommend some sort of intro, as opposed to be dropped right into the map.
- Statue movement. Creepy.
- BAD ANGEL, BAD
- Ending is slightly cliche
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Well, when you said short, you meant short. Some improvements could be made, of course, but you're working on that. Keep it up.
(11-05-2011, 08:39 PM)Obliviator27 Wrote: [ -> ]Downloaded, and am going to play right away. I've got this window open, so I can write my thoughts as I go along through this mod.
Spoiler below!
- I understand that this mod needs more work, but I'll give suggestions nonetheless!
- I'd recommend some sort of intro, as opposed to be dropped right into the map.
- Statue movement. Creepy.
- BAD ANGEL, BAD
- Ending is slightly cliche
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Well, when you said short, you meant short. Some improvements could be made, of course, but you're working on that. Keep it up.
We've been working on improvement for the current part several hours now, and the intro have had much improvements already
I liked it, but I think you should use box lights. aaaaaannnnnnnddddd I can't really say more because you made a very short demo, so there isn't much that I tell you.
(11-08-2011, 12:46 AM)vcplz Wrote: [ -> ]I liked it, but I think you should use box lights. aaaaaannnnnnnddddd I can't really say more because you made a very short demo, so there isn't much that I tell you.
Yeah i know, there box lights and awesome lights in the bedroom now + were releasing a longer demo later today or tomorrow
