(06-17-2013, 03:58 AM)WIWWM Wrote: [ -> ]Put up some more screenshots this time of an outdoor part of the level take a look lemme know what you think please!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/bxzabuguamt65z...3-17.bmp?m
Heres one of the sky
https://www.dropbox.com/s/g2fu16uzi0x4de...1-82.bmp?m
I dont really like the edges im thinking of putting some light fog up there.
1st Picture:
That's really neat looking! Are those snow models from Bitterwood Peak, by chance? A bit of soft-blue lighting could look really nice with a bit of a fog box since it's snowing (snow tends to cloud a person's field of view, right?). Also, wouldn't there be a bit of snow gathering around the railing and walls? Even if a janitor sweeps most of the snow off the building, there would be places it would gather - just like dust gathers in corners and under furniture. Some white decals might work for that. Although I don't now where you would get them :p Also, I love that angel in the archway. It's a really nifty looking touch!
2nd Picture:
Whatever skybox you're using with the snow, it works! I wouldn't use it as a promo screenshot though; there's not much to see.
What you guys think about this picture? Give honest opinions
(06-17-2013, 11:26 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote: [ -> ]
What you guys think about this picture? Give honest opinions
just use imgur, you dont even need to sign up if you dont want to
Oh, didn't noticed that earlier. Okay fixed.
(06-17-2013, 11:55 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote: [ -> ]
Oh, didn't noticed that earlier. Okay fixed.
I actually wanted you to use imgur because it allows you to directly link the image and have it shown in your comment by doing this:
"[img]"http://i.imgur.com/GhNPlT4.jpg"[/img]"(remove ")
or of course you can also just use the insert image button
![[Image: GhNPlT4.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/GhNPlT4.jpg)
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Bar is nice, but scenes like these make Amnesia furniture props look out of place.
Floor texture I think is a bit stretched a tad.
Geometry looks bland and boring, no arches or interesting things in the rafters, looks like a box.
(06-18-2013, 02:09 AM)Rapture Wrote: [ -> ]^
Bar is nice, but scenes like these make Amnesia furniture props look out of place.
Floor texture I think is a bit stretched a tad.
Geometry looks bland and boring, no arches or interesting things in the rafters, looks like a box.
Oh, that's bad to hear, anyways thanks for your criticism I'll try improve it and I'm not using any custom content yet, just original assets and I'l try my best what comes to mapping.
Hi everyone! I came a cross the drawing in the first spoiler and decided I'd give a quick go at remaking it. Depending on feedback here, I may add more detail. What do you guys think?
I like the concept, you just need A LOT more detail. hallways are never that clean. Add particle systems, little props, decorations, lights, etc. etc.
This is just way too plain for now.
![[Image: 0AWYdfV.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/0AWYdfV.jpg)
![[Image: 7MLb0eS.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/7MLb0eS.jpg)