12-16-2015, 01:01 AM
1.
No carpet. You're underground. Nobody would put a carpet there.
It's too symmetric. Tilt some things.
Also remove the chandelier. It'll be nicer if it is a little darker. Then you can bring out a couple of shadows.
Also the room seems too big, or too empty. Try placing a pillar or two.
2.
Need carpet. We're indoors. Unless it's a basement, it's a place where people have to walk, and people in castles often prefer to walk on carpets.
Remove the torch and put a chandelier in the ceiling instead. Try making the ceiling the wooden texture from Cellar (I think).
3.
This room has to many lamps, and requires a window.
Use the window to cast blue light into the room. This will help keeping it lit, make color variation and decrease the amount of lamps needed.
The walls are empty. When you have removed a couple of lamps, put a bookshelf up. Maybe a painting?
4.
This room is too lit by 2 small candles...
There isn't enough rubble on the floor. We're underground!
Also for what's in the room, it is too big. Try to give it a reason for being this big.
No carpet. You're underground. Nobody would put a carpet there.
It's too symmetric. Tilt some things.
Also remove the chandelier. It'll be nicer if it is a little darker. Then you can bring out a couple of shadows.
Also the room seems too big, or too empty. Try placing a pillar or two.
2.
Need carpet. We're indoors. Unless it's a basement, it's a place where people have to walk, and people in castles often prefer to walk on carpets.
Remove the torch and put a chandelier in the ceiling instead. Try making the ceiling the wooden texture from Cellar (I think).
3.
This room has to many lamps, and requires a window.
Use the window to cast blue light into the room. This will help keeping it lit, make color variation and decrease the amount of lamps needed.
The walls are empty. When you have removed a couple of lamps, put a bookshelf up. Maybe a painting?
4.
This room is too lit by 2 small candles...
There isn't enough rubble on the floor. We're underground!
Also for what's in the room, it is too big. Try to give it a reason for being this big.