Thanks for the feedback. I'll change some stuff around in the final product.
Really nice!
On the audio: If you can find a way to take off the higher end frequencies, the footsteps and crash would sound muffled and like they were coming from the other side of the bedroom door.
Thanks for the feedback, Obsidiaguy.
Anyways, I've changed the bedroom's normal music to 23_amb02.ogg in the game files, the music when you're going through the hallway to
House of Leaves by Kevin MacLeod, and the music when you're hiding in the closet to 29_amb_end_intense.ogg from the game files.
Really nice Zaffre, I love it, I wish everyone would put as much effort into their Custom Stories as you put into that one sequence alone. I got more scares by simply watching that video than I would from 1000 poorly implemented jump scares.
Bricks have been shat.
I want moar.
If you want more of my work, be sure to look out for the story I'm making which has the script in it; "An Unwelcome Guest".
Quick Edit: Also, I've edited the script. I'll keep it a secret until the story release though. Hint: It involves custom music.