A few weeks ago i have started creating an amnesia custom story "Tri Orb" , and i'm finished with part 1.
And i might work on the next parts if i get some free time and motivation
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I want you'r opinion on how good it is , script , mapping , scares , etc ..
Please don't be mean if you don't like it just say nicely and honestly so i can improve my next custom stories
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It is my first map , so it won't be professional as the other custom stories in here
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Anyways..
Download Link: [url]
http://www.mediafire.com/?23kgdm9r7xbeh5u[/url]
Pictures:
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I tried fixing your image links to provide pictures in case you're wondering why the format is different. for some reason, this thread is reading that you have 3 extra images somewhere in the post... So only one can be show, not all three. Odd.
Gonna check your cs in a bit.
comments will be added after..
Lange
OK.. Finished it..
Looks OK for me.
Scripting are simpel but your first CS so also alright!
Mapping.... also looking OK..
NOT OK = i had like 4 things is my inventory when i finished...
Things were i guess...
1= 2 orbs
2= a key
3= carbon thing?
and oh.. Don't put YOU: ....text....
Looks really odd to me.. Looks like someone's talking to you..
Overall rate : 6½ - 10
Try to build some more rooms\details\bigger scripts.
I know it takes a LOOOT of time but it will be worth it.
(11-01-2012, 12:53 AM)dnalange Wrote: [ -> ]OK.. Finished it..
Looks OK for me.
Scripting are simpel but your first CS so also alright!
Mapping.... also looking OK..
NOT OK = i had like 4 things is my inventory when i finished...
Things were i guess...
1= 2 orbs
2= a key
3= carbon thing?
and oh.. Don't put YOU: ....text....
Looks really odd to me.. Looks like someone's talking to you..
Overall rate : 6½ - 10
Try to build some more rooms\details\bigger scripts.
I know it takes a LOOOT of time but it will be worth it.
I know , i just started making custom stories. But i hope that i will improve in the next one.
Also thanks for feedback
I'm still playing, and:
-By the moment it's ok.
-But, there are some level fails that destroyed the story. You seem to forget to put ceilings in certain areas.
By the moment, a 7. I will tell you when I finish it
(11-01-2012, 10:51 PM)The chaser Wrote: [ -> ]I'm still playing, and:
-By the moment it's ok.
-But, there are some level fails that destroyed the story. You seem to forget to put ceilings in certain areas.
By the moment, a 7. I will tell you when I finish it
Lol i played it again , and it's really embarrassing.. :I
EDIT: I'm working on a new CS , i don't want this CS anymore.
The new one will have more quality and scarier and voice acting.
Or should i continue on this one?
(11-06-2012, 05:17 PM)naseem142 Wrote: [ -> ] (11-01-2012, 10:51 PM)The chaser Wrote: [ -> ]I'm still playing, and:
-By the moment it's ok.
-But, there are some level fails that destroyed the story. You seem to forget to put ceilings in certain areas.
By the moment, a 7. I will tell you when I finish it
Lol i played it again , and it's really embarrassing.. :I
EDIT: I'm working on a new CS , i don't want this CS anymore.
The new one will have more quality and scarier and voice acting.
Or should i continue on this one?
Hell, continue it. It's not good to have an story interrumpted.