Reading from left to right when it comes to Manga is awkward.
Anyways that is good piece of fanfiction even though it does not explain that part where they suddenly would want to kill Justine. Justine DLC indicates that they didn't love him that much that they would accept to being turned to be monsters. Even that character wants to hunt her down.
I always figured that was up to the player, no? I don't have to have something spelled out black and white when we have no solid evidence of something happening for a particular reason~ ^^
None the less, I started on another doujinshi! This time, taken from Malo's side of the story. I only have two pages up, but I'll be updating on occasion. Just like my last one, this reads from left to right. Enjoy! <3
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=111552
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It becomes more and more disturbing (in a good way, parallel to Justine story) and I like it. Good job as always
I really enjoyed Alois' story. Very interesting. : D
Thanks guys! I'm currently about eight pages into Malo's story. Time permitting, I'm hoping to have a doujin for each of the Suitors, lol. I hope!
I'm still amazed at how such a short DLC story inspired me so much, ha ha. I absolutely love the main game as well, of course~ <3 Frictional is just awesome at stories like that. 
Hey guys! I know it's been like FOREVER, but I'm still continuing with Malo's story! I updated the first post with details, and recently did my muse return to finish this story (with connections to Penumbra, even~).
I haven't been updating on SmackJeeves because of the size limit, to until I find another webcomic hosting site, I linked my dA temporarily. None the less, I hope you guys enjoy!
This is really cool, will read later!
I just read Alois' story.
That's a really nice talent you've got yourself there! The story caught me, even though i actually wasn't going to read... I read it anyway.
But I'll read Malo's story another day! Keep going! You're good!
Amazing work!
I actually opened this thinking "Oh I'll just read a few panels" - expecting myself to get bored. But hell no, I read the whole thing through the duration of one drink
Something I was never sure of in the game (though I'm a little sketchy on Justine's story - need to play it again), does Justine actually have a split personality in a Jekyll and Hyde way? i.e she's not aware of the other 'persons' actions - or is she simply messed up enough to see what she's doing as some sort of game? The fact that she comments with things like "That was the best one yet" in the game, leads me to believe she's aware of the elaborate setup she's created.
I ask because the last page of your comic makes it seem as though she's just forgotten what she did a few pages earlier... and I actually like this angle a lot
That is some great stuff man