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This is going to be my first project in Amnesia, not the best one but i'm doing the best I can.

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PS. Don't mind with the image at the top of the page that says "Revealing Truth: Secrets of The Falconbridge Manor". It was another project, I don't have time now to change the image, but I will change it as soon as I can

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Sounds far to much like A Machine For Pigs. Fix that.

Edit: Also, about the photos. Very bland and empty. Add details. Add some ceiling welders and whatnot to fill in some dark spaces.

Also, that second photo. Faaaaaar too much blood.

Yeah that's pretty much the story of amfp xD You should make up your own story.

(11-24-2013, 01:34 AM)Trialtrex21 Wrote: [ -> ]Sounds far to much like A Machine For Pigs. Fix that.

Edit: Also, about the photos. Very bland and empty. Add details. Add some ceiling welders and whatnot to fill in some dark spaces.

Also, that second photo. Faaaaaar too much blood.

Thanks, i'm still working on the storyline, about the screenshots thing of course they are going to be changed, as I said the mod is in very early stage of development and the detail level on my maps is low, but it will be changed. First of all I want to have empty map, with some stuff, i'm detailing it then. Anyways thank you guys for feedback.

Though most of your images look okay in terms of lighting, I think you need to consider a bit more of that with some of the maps within your trailer. Think realism, nobody would really descend a staircase in complete darkness, add an optional candlestick or two if possible.

(11-25-2013, 10:50 AM)Romulator Wrote: [ -> ]Though most of your images look okay in terms of lighting, I think you need to consider a bit more of that with some of the maps within your trailer. Think realism, nobody would really descend a staircase in complete darkness, add an optional candlestick or two if possible.

It's very old trailer, the maps showed in this video are cut and I deleted them quite long time ago.

(11-25-2013, 03:49 PM)lazz3r0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(11-25-2013, 10:50 AM)Romulator Wrote: [ -> ]Though most of your images look okay in terms of lighting, I think you need to consider a bit more of that with some of the maps within your trailer. Think realism, nobody would really descend a staircase in complete darkness, add an optional candlestick or two if possible.

It's very old trailer, the maps showed in this video are cut and I deleted them quite long time ago.

Ahh okay Going off the images then, they look fantastic! Keep it up!

(11-26-2013, 09:02 AM)Romulator Wrote: [ -> ]

(11-25-2013, 03:49 PM)lazz3r0 Wrote: [ -> ]

(11-25-2013, 10:50 AM)Romulator Wrote: [ -> ]Though most of your images look okay in terms of lighting, I think you need to consider a bit more of that with some of the maps within your trailer. Think realism, nobody would really descend a staircase in complete darkness, add an optional candlestick or two if possible.

It's very old trailer, the maps showed in this video are cut and I deleted them quite long time ago.

Ahh okay Going off the images then, they look fantastic! Keep it up!

thank you ;p