The year is 2016. Your name is Emmett Lee. You're 22 years of age. You live in America, North Georgia. You're paid 200 bucks to urban explore an abandoned underground facility in eastern Tennessee. You're a big fan of urban exploring and have seen some awesome sights in the past. Thinking you're the bravest of your friends, you do it. This was the worst mistake of your life..
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The gameplay starts with you entering the underground facility.
Characters:
Micheal Reed(23, male, caucasian, brown eyes) - One of your douchey friends who paid you to spend a whole night at an abandoned underground facility by the name of, "Area 13" all by yourself.
Asher Lee(26, male, caucasian, green eyes) - Your older brother who warns you not to go to Area 13.
(05-29-2015, 09:21 PM)Koopa Rs07 Wrote: [ -> ]The gameplay starts with you waking up in the middle of some living quarters. You do not remember your personal self, or how you got where you are, but you do have some chip in your neck that allows you to see the previous days by touching an object. Making you try to unfold the plot of the story.
Amnesia - undersea edition.
(05-30-2015, 12:24 AM)i3670 Wrote: [ -> ] (05-29-2015, 09:21 PM)Koopa Rs07 Wrote: [ -> ]The gameplay starts with you waking up in the middle of some living quarters. You do not remember your personal self, or how you got where you are, but you do have some chip in your neck that allows you to see the previous days by touching an object. Making you try to unfold the plot of the story.
Amnesia - undersea edition.
How do you think the game should start?
Ooh, sounds most interesting!
I kind of got some flashbacks of Alien reading that, but not in a bad way. I'd definitely like to see where this could go!
(05-30-2015, 12:29 AM)Koopa Rs07 Wrote: [ -> ] (05-30-2015, 12:24 AM)i3670 Wrote: [ -> ] (05-29-2015, 09:21 PM)Koopa Rs07 Wrote: [ -> ]The gameplay starts with you waking up in the middle of some living quarters. You do not remember your personal self, or how you got where you are, but you do have some chip in your neck that allows you to see the previous days by touching an object. Making you try to unfold the plot of the story.
Amnesia - undersea edition.
How do you think the game should start?
I don't know. It's just that we've had the "You don't know who or where you are, find out"-premise since the start of custom stories. Go for what you feel is appropriate for the story, and who knows it might be an excellent setup for your story.
(05-30-2015, 11:38 AM)i3670 Wrote: [ -> ] (05-30-2015, 12:29 AM)Koopa Rs07 Wrote: [ -> ] (05-30-2015, 12:24 AM)i3670 Wrote: [ -> ] (05-29-2015, 09:21 PM)Koopa Rs07 Wrote: [ -> ]The gameplay starts with you waking up in the middle of some living quarters. You do not remember your personal self, or how you got where you are, but you do have some chip in your neck that allows you to see the previous days by touching an object. Making you try to unfold the plot of the story.
Amnesia - undersea edition.
How do you think the game should start?
I don't know. It's just that we've had the "You don't know who or where you are, find out"-premise since the start of custom stories. Go for what you feel is appropriate for the story, and who knows it might be an excellent setup for your story.
Hey! I'll take out that amnesia part now.
"The whole company is mostly of hired former UFO investigators"
lol that's a lot of retards
"The gameplay starts with you waking up in your living quarter in the morning. You first take a shower and get dressed. As you leave your room it looks like you've been asleep for years. You start searching for your crew to find no one around.."
no one's done that before, especially not machine for pigs or anything. asleep for years... hmm cryogenic chambers?
(06-04-2015, 05:10 AM)213 Wrote: [ -> ]"The whole company is mostly of hired former UFO investigators"
lol that's a lot of retards
"The gameplay starts with you waking up in your living quarter in the morning. You first take a shower and get dressed. As you leave your room it looks like you've been asleep for years. You start searching for your crew to find no one around.."
no one's done that before, especially not machine for pigs or anything. asleep for years... hmm cryogenic chambers?
Yeah I took those parts out. Keep telling me what sounds cheesy or too much like Penumbra or Amnesia. Best and try to chisel out this story to make it sound the best.. And maybe even tell me what I should add. I don't have to be the only one creating the story you know. (And I realize how late this reply is..)
