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Ok now building the graveyard and one of the thousand tunnels you will encounter. Screens coming soon!! Big Grin
(06-02-2011, 06:03 PM)Hardarm Wrote: [ -> ]You're underground, in a very big lair.
Someone threw you on the Forbidden Room.
You've been in a coma for 2 years. When you wake up, strange things will happen, and you have to get out the forbidden room, and then find a way out of the cave. A strange curse happened in the last 2 years, Will you get out of there?


Thank you nkmol for the hanging phonograph, for the hay cart and for the hay.

Update 1: Changed the name of the story


You should give us a better description of the story. It sounds interesting aside from details. For example, I could ask:

Where is this very big lair aside from being underground?

What is the Forbidden Room?

Why was the player in a coma for two years?

What kind of strange things will happen?


It's not like you could answer these questions fully, for it may spoil some of it, but it does make it seem clean and neat to answer them better.
(07-06-2011, 02:30 AM)Kyle Wrote: [ -> ]You should give us a better description of the story. It sounds interesting aside from details. For example, I could ask:

Where is this very big lair aside from being underground?

What is the Forbidden Room?

Why was the player in a coma for two years?

What kind of strange things will happen?


It's not like you could answer these questions fully, for it may spoil some of it, but it does make it seem clean and neat to answer them better.
-Where is this very big lair aside from being underground?

IN HELL

-What is the Forbidden Room?

The gate to heaven

-Why was the player in a coma for two years?

Justin Bieber

-What kind of strange things will happen?

I dunno.

P.S: I'm joking xD. I think he should have explained a little bit better too.
(07-06-2011, 08:46 AM)skypeskype Wrote: [ -> ]-Why was the player in a coma for two years?

Justin Bieber

That is... a fantastic idea, if I disappear y'all know where I went.
He (your exfriend) brought you in the cell on the forbidden room. And then he wanted to kill you, but then you was only in a coma.

SUPER SPOILER CLICK AT YOUR OWN RISK
Spoiler below!
After you get out he says that you killed his family. But it isn't true, you will find it in some notes.
This forbidden room is a very important cell which it's forbidden to go in.
Because it contains a curse etc.

(I wanted to keep those infos in the notes Sad )

The year is something around 1840

There was a conflict in the surface and around 2000 people went underground. (No matter where it is... Agrippa was a German magician, occult writer, theologian, astrologer,
Spoiler below!
and alchemist, not a prisoner from a ritual thing
)

A boss was chosen to command the underground lair. That is really big.
But something happened. Lots of people stopped breathing
Spoiler below!
Included the boss' parents

you was the only survivor, one of his friends. With no idea of what happened, the boss blamed you to
Spoiler below!
kill their parents and people.
And ....
Then what happens in the beginning that I already wrote.

In the last 2 years he changed, he has become a bastard. He created the first microphones (YES I KNOW EMILE BERLINER CREATED IT ON 1876, THIS IS JUST A CUSTOM STORY. I WANNA USE SOME FANTASY.)
Things that was created in the underground, remains into underground.
He built lots of things. When you wake up ...... you'll find out yourself.



If you want sometimes i'll be building.

But sometimes I host a livestreaming when building.

Don't forget to check it out! Because it lags and I want someone to see it too. http://www.livestream.com/hardarm
As first my (self-made) traditional fire:
Spoiler below!
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There will be other things of course, all in the same map! Smile
Of course I will change maps Wink

Too much images in one post.

An energy collapsed hallway (sorry if it is too dark, as every screenshots of course, I have problems with the gamma.)
Spoiler below!
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Room after the Graveyard:
Spoiler below!
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There you are :/

Graveyard:

Spoiler below!
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Those screens are looking great, keep up the good work mate Big Grin

Thank you Smile
As far as I see, maps are highly detailed and huge. Keep it up.
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