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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Yoilickturtles Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 11:33 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: You might want a boxlight in the mansion-themed levels. Just a very dark one. 0.5, 0.6, 0.8 or something like that.
Okey thank you
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 01:08 PM)Yoilickturtles Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 11:33 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: You might want a boxlight in the mansion-themed levels. Just a very dark one. 0.5, 0.6, 0.8 or something like that.
Okey thank you

No, those were wrong colors...

Divide them all by 10...
0.05, 0.06, 0.08

sorry Sad

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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 11:33 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: You might want a boxlight in the mansion-themed levels. Just a very dark one. 0.5, 0.6, 0.8 or something like that.


"0.5, 0.6, 0.8"
"Dark"

WUT




EDIT: okok epic fail.

listen to boards of canada
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04-02-2013, 02:25 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 02:25 PM)Hardarm Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 11:33 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: You might want a boxlight in the mansion-themed levels. Just a very dark one. 0.5, 0.6, 0.8 or something like that.


"0.5, 0.6, 0.8"
"Dark"

WUT




EDIT: okok epic fail.

Yea, sorry i failed...

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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 01:30 PM)BeeKayK Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 01:08 PM)Yoilickturtles Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 11:33 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: You might want a boxlight in the mansion-themed levels. Just a very dark one. 0.5, 0.6, 0.8 or something like that.
Okey thank you

No, those were wrong colors...

Divide them all by 10...
0.05, 0.06, 0.08

sorry Sad
Hahaha okey that explains why it was looking super bad :p
04-02-2013, 03:30 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Some pics from "The Otherworld":

Please, have in mind that it is "The world of madness" (later explained in the story) and that the red is the natural color of the place. I also changed resolution and it might look a bit compressed vertically.

[Image: hhLZaa2.jpg]


[Image: aWAZQ1U.jpg]


[Image: 8Z97YrJ.jpg]

All reviews are appreciated. Sorry for poor quality, I made them .tga, converted to .png, but still a bit pixelated. Sorry for that, guys.
(The Alexander portrait is the normal alexander)

THE OTHERWORLD (WIP)
[Image: k6vbdhu]

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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 05:19 PM)The chaser Wrote: Some pics from "The Otherworld":

Please, have in mind that it is "The world of madness" (later explained in the story) and that the red is the natural color of the place. I also changed resolution and it might look a bit compressed vertically.

All reviews are appreciated. Sorry for poor quality, I made them .tga, converted to .png, but still a bit pixelated. Sorry for that, guys.
(The Alexander portrait is the normal alexander)

The room is pretty big both in height and width... I don't know but the fact that there are empty places annoys me, somehow...

Trying is the first step to success.
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 06:02 PM)BeeKayK Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 05:19 PM)The chaser Wrote: Some pics from "The Otherworld":

Please, have in mind that it is "The world of madness" (later explained in the story) and that the red is the natural color of the place. I also changed resolution and it might look a bit compressed vertically.

All reviews are appreciated. Sorry for poor quality, I made them .tga, converted to .png, but still a bit pixelated. Sorry for that, guys.
(The Alexander portrait is the normal alexander)

The room is pretty big both in height and width... I don't know but the fact that there are empty places annoys me, somehow...

It's supposed to be big, it's the main hall of the mansion. I precisely go here to know how to fill the empty thingies.

THE OTHERWORLD (WIP)
[Image: k6vbdhu]

Aculy iz dolan.
04-02-2013, 06:36 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I rather like what you did with the ceiling, even if it is structurally unsafe Tongue But it's unique and it looks neat! Smile

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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-02-2013, 06:36 PM)The chaser Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 06:02 PM)BeeKayK Wrote:
(04-02-2013, 05:19 PM)The chaser Wrote: Some pics from "The Otherworld":

Please, have in mind that it is "The world of madness" (later explained in the story) and that the red is the natural color of the place. I also changed resolution and it might look a bit compressed vertically.

All reviews are appreciated. Sorry for poor quality, I made them .tga, converted to .png, but still a bit pixelated. Sorry for that, guys.
(The Alexander portrait is the normal alexander)

The room is pretty big both in height and width... I don't know but the fact that there are empty places annoys me, somehow...

It's supposed to be big, it's the main hall of the mansion. I precisely go here to know how to fill the empty thingies.

I simply think you made your room too big.
You cannot just fill it with boxes or anything.
Either try restructuring the room, and see if you can decrease the empty spaces, or you can fill them out with more tables, since it looks like they are the main purpose of the room...
I'd choose the first one.

Trying is the first step to success.
04-02-2013, 09:29 PM
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