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"The Ghosts" - AmnesiaIsScary :S - 09-16-2011

This is a story about ghost in amnesia , Enjoy Big Grin .

"The Ghosts" DEMO :

http://www.mediafire.com/?6gn7wnwbx7f0h73

Pictures:
http://uploadpic.org/v.php?img=kjhgOyoz3O
http://uploadpic.org/v.php?img=3ydX84VDT3
http://uploadpic.org/v.php?img=L8kb0KkqbU
http://uploadpic.org/v.php?img=lksEzt3AtH

Tell me how it is Smile



RE: "The Ghost" - Arvuti - 09-16-2011

slow down there buddy, provide us with screenshots or something. I am not going to download something without knowing what it is.


RE: "The Ghosts" - HumiliatioN - 09-16-2011

Okay first of all I've seen worse custom stories.

First I was thinking the "Custom story description" "Shitty custom story" What?

Second: Rooms are pretty rushed ones... and nothing scary, couple monsters randomly every room almost.

Third: There is not any scares we are not excepting. There is always feeling now something is gonna happen that's not scary at some points.

Fourth: Short, basic story but all is missing the originality, entertainment, nothing new! Just same couple hour projects and there are annoying to play because players are not feeling anything new or unique in these stories.

Sorry but spend more time building better project. But this was not too bad. It was ok I guess. Smile

Just trying to help you pal and make some improvements when you are making next custom story.



RE: "The Ghosts" - Bearscar - 09-16-2011

It was ok.



RE: "The Ghosts" - AmnesiaIsScary :S - 09-16-2011

Yeah , im a begginer Big Grin



RE: "The Ghosts" - ManiacGamingHD - 09-16-2011

The last Justine Monster scared me, When I saw blood, I knew it what's gonna happen. Tongue And my friend says that he got a note near the grunt legs that "End of Demo", I didn't get the note. Anyways, Great story and great scares. Smile (REP+)


RE: "The Ghosts" - AmnesiaIsScary :S - 09-16-2011

(09-16-2011, 04:43 PM)ManiacGamingHD Wrote: The last Justine Monster scared me, When I saw blood, I knew it what's gonna happen. Tongue And my friend says that he got a note near the grunt legs that "End of Demo", I didn't get the note. Anyways, Great story and great scares. Smile
Positive comment ! yey !

Thanks Big Grin I know what Happened with the note .. I uploaded the map when it was deleted then I re upload it .. anyway I don't if you are good at making stories or not but if you are not good so I can help you Smile




RE: "The Ghosts" - Dark Knight - 09-16-2011

first grunt was damn scary!

but overall, seems that map more funny than scary
keep it up.



RE: "The Ghosts" - AmnesiaIsScary :S - 09-17-2011

(09-16-2011, 08:45 PM)Dark Knight Wrote: first grunt was damn scary!

but overall, seems that map more funny than scary
keep it up.
There was no grunt in my map Huh





RE: "The Ghosts" - ManiacGamingHD - 09-17-2011

(09-17-2011, 08:23 AM)AmnesiaIsScary :S Wrote:
(09-16-2011, 08:45 PM)Dark Knight Wrote: first grunt was damn scary!

but overall, seems that map more funny than scary
keep it up.
There was no grunt in my map Huh

Oh don't worry, He must be seeing things. I think he played Amnesia ALOT! Big Grin