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My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - HumiliatioN - 12-17-2010 Hello there.. This is my first map im gonna publish This is Two part of map.. Nothing special here just basic scripting happenings and stuff.. I need feedback! Dont be so serious with this one.. I am noob making maps but enjoy anyways! http://www.mediafire.com/?uw6t5db7s2f9xh8 PS: Updated version! Fixed some textures etc. RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - Tenacious - 12-17-2010 For your first map you did a pretty good job. There are, however, multiple things you should fix:
I'm can name off a handful more stuff, but these are the major points I found to be critical. Remember, I'm trying to help you not bash you. Now with all that aside, I'd like to point out the positive feature of your map:
You may be thinking "wow this guy really hated this map", but in all honesty I found it enjoyable. It was pretty long and kept me busy, so I consider it to be a success. You did a good job considering this is your first map. I hope to play more of your creations! RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - HumiliatioN - 12-17-2010 Wow Thanks! I appreciate this and yes for the "Notes" I have very poor english language because i am finnish peoples And i appreciate your criticism!! I need that! Yes overall its my first and there are tinderboxes and oil lamps everywhere and this is test map i guess.. Because my first dungeon area was there then it becomes mansion parts and stuff... Annoying but my first and the lightings hard to seperate sometimes.. Because you have lantern.. And yeah slimes with walls not good... But i was suprised when you like that Patrolling scene Yeah my second map is gonna be much better and larger areas and last my scripting is poor only few nice scripting scary doors, monsters and normally keys and sanity... thats all i got... That puzzle part scripting is hard to me.. But slowly learning.. Thanks for feedback! RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - Tenacious - 12-17-2010 (12-17-2010, 04:24 AM)HumiliatioN Wrote: Wow Thanks! I appreciate this and yes for the "Notes" I have very poor english language because i am finnish peoples And i appreciate your criticism!! I need that! Yes overall its my first and there are tinderboxes and oil lamps everywhere and this is test map i guess.. Because my first dungeon area was there then it becomes mansion parts and stuff... Annoying but my first and the lightings hard to seperate sometimes.. Because you have lantern.. And yeah slimes with walls not good... But i was suprised when you like that Patrolling scene Yeah my second map is gonna be much better and larger areas and last my scripting is poor only few nice scripting scary doors, monsters and normally keys and sanity... thats all i got... That puzzle part scripting is hard to me.. But slowly learning.. Oh, I'm sorry if I reprehended your English skills, I didn't know you were Finnish. RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - HumiliatioN - 12-17-2010 No problem. Now you know and one more thing that Sound thing.. I dont know how to make each area one sound looping or not.. Its not working that way.. And many too scripts like lever, trigger zombie example. When you pick item or note.. and make water and use Crowbar with door and other items and combine them.. I just wanna learn these scripts and im fine then. RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - waqas12346 - 12-17-2010 I'm playing your map RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - HumiliatioN - 12-17-2010 (12-17-2010, 06:13 AM)waqas12346 Wrote: I'm playing your map Cool make guide video and im glad Enjoy that map! RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - Shev - 12-17-2010 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J0N1yY937qg RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - Oscar House - 12-17-2010 Heeey, being Finnish doesn't stop you from learning English (or any other language for that matter). To live is to learn, right? ;D I'll be trying this story once I get home! RE: My First Map: FTD = "Fear The Darkness" - HumiliatioN - 12-17-2010 (12-17-2010, 08:59 AM)Oscar House Wrote: Heeey, being Finnish doesn't stop you from learning English (or any other language for that matter). To live is to learn, right? ;D Yeah i guess.. Hmh... you will be disappointed with this map |