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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Daktoa Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Alright I tried to start with something a little smaller this time.
Here's the entrance to the sewer.

Spoiler below!

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08-06-2014, 01:17 AM
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CarnivorousJelly Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I like the orange/blue contrast (it's the best), but that torch is a little impractically placed - I'd be afraid of burning my back while climbing that ladder :p Perhaps it would sit better off to the side or the front?

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08-06-2014, 09:55 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Hi guys! these screens are cool, yeah, nice thread lol

*Is there a way to delete your own reply?*

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08-06-2014, 10:24 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-06-2014, 09:55 AM)Carnivorous Jellybean Wrote: I like the orange/blue contrast (it's the best), but that torch is a little impractically placed - I'd be afraid of burning my back while climbing that ladder :p Perhaps it would sit better off to the side or the front?

I kinda pushed it back a little, does this look good? I kinda like the way it looks with the wood plank.

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08-06-2014, 11:00 AM
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Daktoa Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I didn't, the door was just closed in the last screenshot.
08-06-2014, 12:43 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Something I made for Neelke and reused for wallpaper purpose...

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08-06-2014, 06:36 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Well, it's a shame that's not how it will be in game. Would've been an epic level that as well. (I know this is off topic of what I'm posting now)

Derp.
08-06-2014, 07:51 PM
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Daktoa Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Dang that looks nice.
I'm imagining a generic custom story where you're trying to escape a castle, but once you finally escape you realize there's nowhere to go, youre trapped.
This image would be a great end of story reveal.
08-06-2014, 11:05 PM
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CarnivorousJelly Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Holy jeepers, where did my mapping skills go?
Spoiler below!

[Image: abandoned_room_by_rueppells_fox-d7u7vyy.png]
The walls, floor, window, and door are all re-textured assets. Wish I'd retextured the spider webs to tone down their alpha too, now... maybe tomorrow.


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08-08-2014, 07:12 AM
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Radical Batz Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-08-2014, 07:12 AM)Carnivorous Jellybean Wrote: Holy jeepers, where did my mapping skills go?
Spoiler below!

[Image: abandoned_room_by_rueppells_fox-d7u7vyy.png]
The walls, floor, window, and door are all re-textured assets. Wish I'd retextured the spider webs to tone down their alpha too, now... maybe tomorrow.

That looks good actually Smile

08-08-2014, 07:26 AM
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