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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
victorkim890(KimmyChimmy) Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-20-2014, 11:25 PM)falconpewds Wrote: [Image: RXs3rbH.jpg]
the wall with the wondow doesnt match with all the other walls

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08-22-2014, 02:57 AM
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CarnivorousJelly Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

It's valid to mix and match - but, like mentioned earlier in the thread, the mixing and matching has to be done well.

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08-22-2014, 03:45 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Oh! Jelly, you forgot to add that theres a random ceiling on the floor. Remove that because we can see directly through it.

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08-22-2014, 07:05 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I did not D: I just wrote a wall of text that it got buried in :p

(08-20-2014, 11:44 PM)CarnivorousJelly Wrote:
  • You have a ceiling on the floor (which we can see through). They don't really make that much sense.

Though I did forget to mention the stairs leading to nowhere in the corner >.>

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08-22-2014, 08:02 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-22-2014, 08:02 AM)CarnivorousJelly Wrote: I did not D: I just wrote a wall of text that it got buried in :p

(08-20-2014, 11:44 PM)CarnivorousJelly Wrote:
  • You have a ceiling on the floor (which we can see through). They don't really make that much sense.

Though I did forget to mention the stairs leading to nowhere in the corner >.>

Oh then I missed it Big Grin
Sorry!

Ok, we got the stairs covered too then Wink


But to be honest, it does look like it is mostly different objects thrown into the editor and then thrown in the screenshot criticism for troll and giggles.

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08-22-2014, 10:21 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-22-2014, 02:57 AM)victorkim890(KimmyChimmy) Wrote: the wall with the wondow doesnt match with all the other walls

the truth has been spoken.
08-22-2014, 05:59 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Spoiler below!
[Image: 6rw2zle.png]

Unfinished sewers map, i will add water of course but what should i add more?

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08-23-2014, 02:14 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-23-2014, 02:14 PM)thginKeR Wrote:
Spoiler below!
[Image: 6rw2zle.png]

Unfinished sewers map, i will add water of course but what should i add more?

Maybe a bunch of pipes and some moist on some walls.
You might also add a greenish yellowish fog to make it look more like a dirt sewer!

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08-23-2014, 02:28 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-23-2014, 02:14 PM)thginKeR Wrote:
Spoiler below!
[Image: 6rw2zle.png]

Unfinished sewers map, i will add water of course but what should i add more?

That light doesn't have a source, so I would recommend that you add some lamps.

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08-23-2014, 02:51 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

The pointlight was to make the sewers look clearly

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08-23-2014, 02:58 PM
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