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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Rahmerh Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Like I said, I wanted to get the light right, first. But I'm going to dress the room up first, see how it looks Smile Thanks!

EDIT: New screenshot Smile
Spoiler below!
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(This post was last modified: 06-30-2015, 12:22 PM by Rahmerh.)
06-30-2015, 12:16 PM
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7heDubz Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Everybody like "New Screenshot!" and I'm just here like "Still waiting to toy with SOMA Level editor"

06-30-2015, 01:00 PM
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MatiCekuriel Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I'm more excited by SOMA for the level editor than the game itself Tongue
So, here is the first version of the "optional menu" of my next Custom Story, what do you think ? Smile

Spoiler below!

[Image: 1435679508-2015-06-30-00001.jpg]


Maybe I can add some dust particles Sad
06-30-2015, 04:53 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

The godrays are too bright and too long.
Also, make them something else than white/gray.

Otherwise, pretty good!

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06-30-2015, 05:04 PM
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MatiCekuriel Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

They are supposed to be blue :O
Well, now they are !
06-30-2015, 05:17 PM
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Rahmerh Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

If it's a sewer, shouldn't you have some stains, loose rocks, etc. laying around? That path at the right looks a bit clean.
It's looking good, apart from that!
06-30-2015, 05:19 PM
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MatiCekuriel Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Okay, I tried to add some decals and rocks on the floor Smile

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06-30-2015, 05:36 PM
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Rahmerh Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Yeah that looks better IMO, well done man!
06-30-2015, 05:50 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Great job, I like the contrast. Add some low-alpha fog particles under the godrays, to simulate dust being lit up.

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06-30-2015, 05:54 PM
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MatiCekuriel Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Okay I have put a fog and a large light dust particle Tongue
Thank you, if you see something to add, tell me ! Big Grin
06-30-2015, 06:02 PM
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