Young Male Voice Actor Needed

[Mathiasz]

I just sent you a message, Miss Rigi
It's kind of my first time voice acting.

If anyone else wants to hear and maybe give me feedback, you're more than welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/mathiasgebuhr/youn...-voice-act

By the way - the background noise was my fan.
It's fixed now and there is total silence in my room, hehe.

Don't take this hard (don't want you to be afraid of voiceacting in the future)!

You start off with a "normal accent of english". All is well. Then as soon as the voice-acting starts you switch into this guy:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SRH-Ywpz1_I

Just the fact that you forget "Does it ever occur to you how ridiculous all of this is?" in this sentence makes it more funny :>

Try to tone it down, and do a sample with your "normal voice" (which to me seemed perfectly fine).

Thanks for the feedback, buddy!
Haha, yeah. Actually I say "all" so fast that you don't even notice it, but I do say it - doesn't matter anyways

Well, the "intro" voice is a bit darker and deeper than my normal one actually, but close to the normal. I just thought I'd give the "piece" som energy and since there isn't any information on what the situation is when the lines are being said, I basically have no clue how to act heheh.