[WIP] First "Real" Custom Story, Need some testers! [Update 0.3]

[The Shanus]

Okay, so the beginning was great. First question came about with the loading, I don't think you need to put so many level doors straight away. Especially as you go down a ladder and come out of a door :p Aside from that, there was a crash! As I tried to go through the loading door after the water part, the game crashed :[ Let me know when you fix that, and I'll play the rest.