BACK TO WORK! - The Eeriest Underground

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You should give us a better description of the story. It sounds interesting aside from details. For example, I could ask:

Where is this very big lair aside from being underground?

What is the Forbidden Room?

Why was the player in a coma for two years?

What kind of strange things will happen?


It's not like you could answer these questions fully, for it may spoil some of it, but it does make it seem clean and neat to answer them better.

-Where is this very big lair aside from being underground?

IN HELL

-What is the Forbidden Room?

The gate to heaven

-Why was the player in a coma for two years?

Justin Bieber

-What kind of strange things will happen?

I dunno.

P.S: I'm joking xD. I think he should have explained a little bit better too.