I beta tested an played the prologue and i must admit this looks like it can turn into something big BUT theres always two mistakes almost every custom story maker makes... including you:
- Adding too many monsters.
- Not laying out enough sounds/music.
Please, please, PLEASE avoid doing any of these mistakes when making the rest of this series. Amnesias main experiance was absolutely stunning and terrifiying because it had none of these mistakes in them! I remember Cry almost being scared in a custom story called One light in the darkness because it had these core elments! So once again please dont add grunt orgy partys or awkward silent rooms cause it ruins what can be potentially good!
P.S: my English is terrible so excuse me.
P.S.S: I would love to beta test chapter 1 too! But i guess you have enough people for that already