[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[CarnivorousJelly]

EDIT: I'll touch up those billboards on the top window when I'm on the editor again, thanks Streetboat

Detail on the floor - it seems over grown, apply that nice dirt decal and add grass of varying sizes and heights (make sure the collision is turned off) as well as pebbles and a some dry hay decals near doors as well as dirt, needs a lot of particles around the light sources and lit areas, dust (darker, dirtier color of light it is in) generally more stuff, feels really empty especially in this light.

I hadn't thought of the hay decals! They actually look a lot better than I thought they would in the area.

It seems rather empty aside from pillars. consider adding some wooden beams across the ceiling or something of that nature. Carpets, tables, bookshelves, suits of armor, banners on the walls, stuff of that nature could be added coherently as well - the sky's the limit.

Also, there should be a lot more dirt on the ground considering the way its piled with plants growing out of the ground in a few places.

nice looking billboards btw

I tried to fill it up a little bit more - is this looking better?

Spoiler below!