Unexpected Token

[Southlaguna]

I got the same result, its strange that this happens to completely different custom stories on my mac and my pc but with different errors, both involving the opening or closing brackets. It cant be both of my systems preventing the story from working. I have even tried installing a torrented version to see if its something wrong with the game i bought, i also torrented the editor and a notepad++ but still the same problem. How can this even be possible?