Mind looking at my youtube page?

[Shiroku]

Well to try'n pitch in with some constructive critique, an amusing lets player really must be able to pretty much constantly talk, to be able to pull off jokes/make fun of things whatever, depending on what you play. What isn't exactly very interesting is just watching a person play the game as if he would play it in his couch. ''I just picked up a key and I will open the door over here with this key, oh no there was a monster. I am now running the other way '' Is an example of terrible commentary, because yesah... We can already see all of that.

Hope this helped somehow, excuse me if I'm being unclear.. I just woke up and I'm fuzzy in mah heeead~

That helps, only problem I have, is if I try to continuously speak, I ramble.
Even if I don't get anywhere, that isn't my goal. and I'll continue to do it because I know people who actually watch them IRL and enjoy it! Good enough of a reason for me to play it, because some people enjoy it.

Anyways, thanks for the tips. And great work on your videos!
Nice voice... I'm jealous.