The Surprise [UPDATED]

[JawJoe]

Keep comments coming! Getting constructive feedback is exactly why I put this up. I am, of course, glad to see that many people seem to like it despite its "imperfectness", to put it lightly.

It was a decent custom story for your first time but it felt kinda rushed (even if it was just 5 minutes it can still feel rushed)

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Was the grunt you encounter at the start supposed to chase you? Since the music played for a second then stopped and the grunt just stood there not chasing me. It would be nice if you could make the grunt into a bigger threat.

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The zombie would, originally, sprint towards the player. I made some of my friends play the map a few times and they always ended up being caught so I nerfed him so that he waits a few seconds before going for you, and even then he only starts running if you get really close. I could've made it harder, but I wanted the map to be forgiving.
Also, see how in one of the LPs posted on this very page, a guy still manages to get caught..