"The End" - Music Project - Thoughts?

[Bridge]

Sounds good, would make great ending credit music for a survival horror/adventure game with a protagonist-heavy story. The tempo (is that the correct musical term for 'pace'?) seems a little disjointed though; sort of speeds up & slows down irregularly.

Tempo is the correct term. The term for "speeding up and slowing down irregularly" is rubato. Basically it means no strict adherence to any one tempo and freedom of rhythm. But this piece isn't very free at all, in fact I'm sure the disjointedness was a mistake in the performance, apart from the slight slow down near the end of the phrases.