[SCRIPT] Help with my story

[The chaser]

Before i modified the script, the map worked perfectly. The .lang file is the same, but if you want it, here you have (but careful, it can ruin the story!)
I made the lang file with a program of the Frictional Games wiki.

.lang file:

<LANGUAGE>
<RESOURCES>
</RESOURCES>
<CATEGORY Name="CustomStoryMain">
<Entry Name="Description">The mind is something that can be very dark... prepare yourself.</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Journal">
<Entry Name="Note1_Name">Journal</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note1_Name">Hello, Daniel...</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note1_Text">Daniel... I'm your opposite. Your other side, your other dimension... I'm the dark part of you. As it, i'll try to kill you. Simple, isn't? Let's see if I can do it... Perhaps your "good mind" puts other notes for there, don't read them.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note2_Name">Daniel, read this, please...</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note2_Text">Daniel... something terrible happened. You must survive, and of course, you have to escape. A new virus infected you, and it corrupted the brain. Me, your mind. Now you have two minds in your head, the dark one and me. Daniel. Fight your fears. You must fight him. Watch out. Be careful. </Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note3_Name">Test 1: Dark mind</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note3_Text">Man, this is going to be good. Try to escape from my servants if you can. Let's see what you got.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note4_Name">Test 2: Dark mind</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note4_Text">Damn! You did it! You survived! No, this is not going to be this way, YOU WILL DIE. Yes, you will. Let's see what you can do, enemy.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note5_Name">Good mind</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note5_Text">Daniel, i know what's wrong. I must tell you that you are going to have a true nightmare. Find the key, get out of here and kill the master. He's a brute, it is going to be hard to defeat.I'll just try to put the necessary tools for doing it. But now you have priorities.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note6_Name">Dark mind</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note6_Text">You are doing it... no, you are not going to escape. Nevermind, try to do it in here. Are you so sure yo will do it? No, you will DIE in here. Yes, that's it. Oh, i've done one thing... you will see it when you stop reading this note.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note7_Name">Good mind</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note7_Text">Daniel, i discovered a very important thing. Some monsters dissapear with fog. If you find some, try to use it with them.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note8_Name">Daniel, read this</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_note8_Text">Daniel, you must hurry. He is finishing with me, kill the master! In this room you can see it: The dark mind is winning. That can't happen, you must kill the master, or we are going to die.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_FINAL_good_Name">Your final stand</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_FINAL_good_Text">Daniel, this is the final. The enemy is going to appear. The only thing i can say is good luck. Kill the master. I put a hammer so you can crush his bones. It won't be easy, but... Good luck.</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Messages">
<Entry Name="WalkQuest_1">I should hide in that wardrobe.</Entry>
<Entry Name="WalkQuest">I think that i must run...</Entry>
<Entry Name="WalkQuest_2">What? A servant? Damn it...</Entry>
<Entry Name="WalkQuest_final">I.. I did it! I killed him! I'm free!</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Ending">
<Entry Name="Credits">The chasing: Made by TheNoobLevelCreator. [br]This is my first story,[br]and it may have some errors, [br]but i hope everyone enjoyed this story. [br]You can find me in the Frictional Games Forum.[br][br]*-Thanks to:[br][br]A friend (Rembar) who gave me ideas)[br]Jennifer Orange[br]Frictional Games, for releasing amnesia[br]and the necessary tools for making this custom story.[br]The Frictional Games forum, for being so attentive and helping the persons with needs.[br][br][br]*-Music (they are modified)[br]Credits: Amon Amarth: Valhalla awaits me[br]Master fight: Shadow of the colossus soundtrack(The opened way)[br][br]</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
<CATEGORY Name="Levels">
<Entry Name="Art room">Art room</Entry>
<Entry Name="?">What is this? Should I enter?</Entry>
<Entry Name="Downstairs">Downstairs</Entry>
<Entry Name="I should cross...">I should cross...</Entry>
</CATEGORY>
</LANGUAGE>