Amnesia Story Idea(s) Thread

[FlawlessHappiness]

Got an idea while i was showering.

The Idea:
It starts out like most custom stories (I know I know,
that's probably not good then, but try read what I wrote)

You wake up in a cell.
The door is locked, and it seems like there's nobody around.
There should be one or two ways to do this, but somehow you
make a loud sound. (Break a bottle or something like that).
A voice comes from the pipe in the wall.
"Hey man. Are you awake?".
You don't recognize the voice, but since you've got nothing
else to do, you listen.
(I won't make the player say anything. I think that will
make it much better)
"Listen. We don't have much time before it happens. You
probably won't trust me, but do you have anything in your cell that could
possibly help me out of my cell?"
The player slides an object inside the pipe.
Noises, that sounds like he breaks a door open.
"Ok, I'll lock you out now. If you can make it, meet me
at the next pipe."
The player runs through some corridors, and ends up in a
rooms with a new pipe.


So that is mostly how the story will go.
You solve puzzles with help from somebody you don't know who
are, but you are both breaking out from this place.

You are supposed to start one giant machine. What you don’t
know is that it’s a time machine.
The other guy sometimes mentions something about changing what has already happened, and that it should never have happened.

When you get to the final point where you have to start the
machine, your friend says: ”So this is
it. From this point only one of us can continue. Thank you for your help. I will
always remember you.”

And you will somehow end up in a cell. You hear a crash from
the other cell through a pipe. A guy says: ”Is there anybody in here?”, and he
starts talking.

Basicly what happens is that you are now the other guy.
Helping yourself, and you will see the story from a whole new perspective.