[WIP] Enjoy Your Stay at Hotel Brennenburg!

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Looks nice. I have a few things in screenshot #3.
Don't put huge amount of [SANITY POTION], [LAUDANUM], and [OIL] in a map. It will look weird. Make the [SANITY POTION] scarce.
Use logic. One does not simply put a statue in a table! Put it in a cabinet or something.
the ones in the brackets ( the []) are items.

I don't know what happened last night, I think I met for the statue to act like it's reading the bible...

The letter on the desk also states that the castle is on lock down and the hotel's employees came around and gave everyone necessary equipment for the evacuation process, in case you encountered a decoy. If it's still odd I will definitely remove it, since this is my first custom story I have no skill in mapping, and I don't like doing it .
Thank you!

Everyone is bad when they start off. You're never going to get better at mapping if you don't make maps.

Agree. If you don't like mapping, well your custom story is an unfinished CS.
You'll have to practise your mapping.