Amnesia Custom Storie

[Babyforce]

Here is my revieuw :
when starting the map, WHY are you locked in your own room and WHY is there a crowbar? doesn't make any sense to me..
The first encounter bugged my game already! WHY didn't you make a checkpoint there? grunt killed me and he didnt spawn again.. so he didn't broke the door!
For the rest of the game : WAY too many grunts \ encounters!
PICKUP ITEM = almost all the time encounter!
Try to make less of those encounters and make the game more scary with like : SOUNDS \ particles etc..
That key in the first room with : i should hold this key.. IF people don't find this key... they won't ever finish the game.. DON'T make those kind of things unless you know what you are doing! OR give hints\quests for that..
Mapping was good to me..
Specially for first story.
A little bit empty but heey, first story!..
Good use of diferent items, liked that!
the only BIG issue is ENGLISH \ translation!
Damn that was bad!, NEXT time before you upload let someone else do the grammar!!!
Overall rating : 5\10

Sorry but i've put a checkpoint and when you will be kill, the grunt re-spawn (Sometimes, monsters are not spawning, it's not my fault). For the character room, this is not his room. He just wake up in a mysterious mansion. For the grunts, i put what i want in my Custom Storie and i want you to be afraid from the beginning until the end (generaly, Custom Storie begin slowly, here, it begin quickly). For the sounds and particles i don't know were i can put this and this is my first Custom Storie, i've work alone on this (So it take lot of time). For the items, you need that. The key without tag is not requiered to finish the game, i've put two end. For the bad English, I SAY I'M NOT ENGLISH AND I AM NOT BILINGUAL. T'as qu'a parler français non mais