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Penumbra Apocalypse[Cancelled]
Kreekakon Offline
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RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP]

You seriously need to work on many of your mapping skills. Here are the biggest issues that I can notice from your alpha video:

-Map is too empty. Not much items besides the essential furniture.
-Lighting is overall too bright. There is no linearity in the light to make it more compelling
-Amnesia furniture, and general entities looks highly out of place in a setting like this.
Ground, and walls could use more detail. Such as decals! Those always help!

So take a look at other people's maps, and study what makes them so compelling. Then learn the craft for yourself. Good luck on improving your mod! Smile

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03-06-2014, 09:24 PM
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Penumbra Apocalypse[Cancelled] - by SSEAlexander - 02-26-2014, 08:51 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by RedKnight - 03-04-2014, 07:20 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Romulator - 03-04-2014, 09:35 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by LordOfDragons - 03-04-2014, 09:02 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 03:53 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Nice - 03-06-2014, 08:03 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Traggey - 03-06-2014, 08:49 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 09:02 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by LordOfDragons - 03-06-2014, 09:19 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Tesseract - 03-16-2014, 08:35 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Kreekakon - 03-06-2014, 09:24 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Daemian - 03-06-2014, 09:37 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 09:49 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-06-2014, 10:02 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 10:03 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-06-2014, 10:05 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 10:08 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-06-2014, 10:12 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Nice - 03-07-2014, 02:43 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 10:16 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-06-2014, 10:18 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-06-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 02:58 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 03:41 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 03:50 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 04:19 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 04:29 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 04:33 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 04:57 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 05:12 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 05:19 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 05:24 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 05:32 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 05:40 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 05:52 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 05:55 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 06:00 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 06:02 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 06:11 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 06:16 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 06:21 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 09:53 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-07-2014, 10:21 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-07-2014, 10:34 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Slanderous - 03-07-2014, 10:37 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-08-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by MsHannerBananer - 03-08-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-08-2014, 01:24 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Slanderous - 03-08-2014, 05:22 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Kreekakon - 03-08-2014, 05:24 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-08-2014, 06:41 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by RedKnight - 03-08-2014, 06:45 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by RedKnight - 03-08-2014, 06:25 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Red - 03-08-2014, 08:01 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-08-2014, 10:02 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-08-2014, 10:29 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-09-2014, 09:00 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by RedKnight - 03-09-2014, 12:46 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-09-2014, 02:49 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-09-2014, 03:27 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-09-2014, 05:18 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-10-2014, 06:17 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Slanderous - 03-10-2014, 10:29 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-11-2014, 03:22 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-11-2014, 04:44 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-11-2014, 01:10 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-11-2014, 01:25 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-11-2014, 02:00 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Traggey - 03-11-2014, 07:50 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Radical Batz - 03-11-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by RedKnight - 03-12-2014, 07:55 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-12-2014, 07:45 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-13-2014, 05:33 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-13-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-14-2014, 01:55 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-14-2014, 06:30 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-15-2014, 03:46 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Red - 03-15-2014, 04:51 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by LordOfDragons - 03-15-2014, 05:35 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-15-2014, 05:40 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Red - 03-15-2014, 06:04 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-15-2014, 06:18 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Red - 03-15-2014, 06:33 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-15-2014, 06:36 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by MsHannerBananer - 03-16-2014, 09:03 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Red - 03-15-2014, 06:48 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Slanderous - 03-15-2014, 09:58 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by Romulator - 03-16-2014, 12:30 AM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-16-2014, 03:02 PM
RE: Penumbra Apocalypse[WIP] - by SSEAlexander - 03-31-2014, 03:20 PM



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