[DEMO] Amnesia : S.C.A.V.A

[Darkfire]

Well. I played it, but I gave up about half in the game because I didn't know what's going on. You didn't tell the story to the player ! Most of it stayed in your head !
The puzzles and jumpscares were sensless most of the time, and not really tweaked enough. It's because you didn't think like a player. You need to think like "I don't know what is happening, what should I do ?"
You had some nice maps, like that one with soothing music and those flying things in the air. Some of them were kind of ugly, like the forest - you could see the sky behind the trees.
However, I have to admit you found (made ?) some fabolous sky textures- cheers to that, I couldn't find too many

To summarize: This CS is a warm-up. DON'T GIVE UP!You just need to write better, and make sure your scripts work and look appealing. You can do lots of basic scripting and mapping, which is good, now use that knowledge to do something new and be creative ! People prefer to see new things rather than the same one over and over again. (at least in horror) Good luck !