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Experi-mental; my first story/map
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Experi-mental; my first story/map

Hello everyone! I just started using HPL and scripting a little less than a week ago, and am addicted!

This is my first demo for my story "Experi-mental" (name could change at any time though lol)

I don't want to give too much away, but it involves a student staying in his professor's mansion to make use of his massive private library.

I'd love any constructive criticism etc.

Thanks!

v1.1 - 3/26/11: Added more rooms, fixed grammar/spelling, and other issues. Right now things are very spread out and not connected puzzle-wise, or story-wise. But since I plan on building, then adding more puzzles & quests, they will come later. I mainly want feedback on building/design. I'm sure I've missed some welders in corners etc. Would love it if you point those out, too! Thanks!

Quick note; the botany study (you'll see which one it is) is currently not where it should be. But I wanted it connected the the main hall for now. Where it is now doesn't make much sense window-wise, but later it will. Smile

Still haven't taken out the Sanity Boosts. (I know they're a bit too much)


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(This post was last modified: 03-27-2011, 05:28 AM by Jakeorch.)
03-21-2011, 06:23 AM
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Experi-mental; my first story/map - by Jakeorch - 03-21-2011, 06:23 AM
RE: Experi-mental; my first story/map - by Droopy - 03-21-2011, 07:24 AM
RE: Experi-mental; my first story/map - by Nye - 03-21-2011, 08:23 PM



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