In need of some voice acting [updated with new lines]

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I'm so going to redo this if I get the part, but this is my try out
http://www.partage-facile.com/7Q1IPT28MT...g.mp3.html

Dang! Your girl laugh at the end was so creepy, that would have freaked me out if I heard it in Amnesia! x_x

Here is my try: not the best one since my roomate was in here and I didn't want to bother him too much, so I keep it rather quiet (I almost wanted to yell that last line). I only did two takes, so you will hear the whole lines twice...Yeah, you can tell Cryotic's try was some inspiration for the breathing/crying .

http://www.partage-facile.com/CX7GWIM96P...e.mp3.html