Dark Mansion: Chapter 1

[Tenno]

Decent story but with several flaws, first off the story was weak and didn't make any sense. There weren't many scares and when they were triggered they were not frightening enough. Some of the rooms were extremely bright and very distracting while others had texture problems with the floors, walls and ceilings. Wasn't awful, but wasn't great.
Good luck with improving your skills and creating future stories