"Hunted" Custom Story (News)

[Mr. Bombastic]

NEWS: I am working on my 2nd Custom Story, with story-line and all that stuff that wasn't well made in my first!

No Name for now: 20% Finished
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So, this is my first Custom Story after long time learning to understand the scripts functions and stuff..
Please after you played it, tell me what you think about it and what i could do better.
It was really hard work and i think i did well, i hope..

Also if you see some flaws or what i could edit, comment
IF you vote for average or bad, at least TELL ME what i could do better! :C

Here is the download link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?2m8krlb8d6fxodo

For those who prefer watching it or don't want to play it, here is the walkthrough video:




Thank you and have fun(fear)