[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Kman]

Hey guys! :>

I'm at a loss of what to add to this area. An inspirational "stuck". I can model so, ice crystals etc. are possible. Suggest if you come up with something. Secondly I'm looking for "lighting tips". Any other criticism is welcome too!

Spoiler below!

The woman is an import which I textured.

i don't really know how you would go about adding details to that to be honest... i mean even the pipes feel a little out of place. also another thing is even though the lighting is very interesting there is nothing that it is coming from, it's just light coming from the cieling without any source to it. this is a big problem in my opinion, maybe just put some florecsent lights up on the cieling to make it seem more realistic

What makes your room look a little bit odd is the fact that your box light doesn't share the same color as the light sources inside the room. Feels like your box light has so much red that the window looks red.

The redish lighting is what I was going for. It is suppose to be early morning. And you would only be visiting this map in kinda like a flashback (Blurred screen effects, ect), which is why the lights are a little bright and off.

well if you are going for a morningish feel, i'd set the box light to a really low blueish yellow, then have really intense light streaming in from the window (to make it seem as if the sun is just starting to shine through). as it is now it looks great, but i feel that if you're trying to make it feel like it's in the morning that would make it a better.