[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Zaari]

It's from my upcoming unannounced project, which will end most likely like my other stuff. But yeah i'll try to get help @ storywriting. *smile*
And please guys forgive me about clipping particles, i'm finding a way to make them fit

Good job on the detail in your maps. There's not much that needs improvement there. However, the rooms in the 3rd and 4th pictures are pretty bright. You should probably lower the lighting there.
Also, clipping particle textures are easier to handle if they are the same color as the objects around them. The ones in your pictures are completely white when they should be a darker, slightly brownish color.

Anyways, here's a map/room I've been working on lately:

Spoiler below!