[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[CarnivorousJelly]

It's pretty easy to find the easy colour. Put the alpha level a bit more to less, like 0.75, and make the FalloffExp higher, and the end fade distance. It's really nothing too hard.

There's this thing called experimenting, and it looks like you've done it a bit there, but you cant make such fog and find an excuse for the one who judges your screenshots. The building does not look like it's got a roof and the screenie is too plain simple, it hasn't got something a bit characteristic imo. (Maybe that fog, but it looks like sooo unrealistic)

Didn't want to act rude and anything though

^ this.

Try something similar to the colour of the clouds for the fog. If that doesn't work, then something more like the building. Fog will be the colour of the light hitting it. Aim for something more like one of these:
http://www.zastavki.com/pictures/1366x76...03572_.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VoOYn-1NTd4/Tt...711766.jpg
http://globeattractions.com/wp-content/u...lpaper.jpg
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-V5i5t8XXUvo/Tt...712632.jpg