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Oblivion: Drops Of Wine
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RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine

Ok. I'll do it quick.

I like the idea with Timetravelling and a future you.


Things you need to improve:
You need to practice much more on mapping.
You have a lot of places where you can see through the walls, misplaced walls and just walls that look weird.
I wasn't able to finish the map since i got stuck. I found, that i had to find a "prison-door", but i couldn't find it. Instead i went to the place with the bed that blocks the door. The wall that is broken in that room is walkthrough-able! I could literally walk behind the walls, which was a little weird.
Some rooms and corridors weren't decorated at all... It takes time, but YES it works!

Things i like:
I like that you say that there will be much key-to-door, because there was, and that made me a little less disappointed Wink


So:

-Learn a little bit more mapping.
-Work even more on your story ideas.
-Improve your scripting too.

I know you got the story rated 9, but you still have a lot to improve! It's fine what you made... but keep learning. You're not done.

Trying is the first step to success.
(This post was last modified: 12-31-2012, 11:28 PM by FlawlessHappiness.)
12-31-2012, 11:27 PM
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Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-23-2012, 12:18 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by HumiliatioN - 01-23-2012, 03:43 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-23-2012, 03:59 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by HumiliatioN - 01-23-2012, 04:38 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Mr.Amnesia - 01-23-2012, 04:33 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-23-2012, 04:43 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Mr.Amnesia - 01-23-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Dark Knight - 01-23-2012, 07:44 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-23-2012, 08:02 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Dark Knight - 01-23-2012, 10:11 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Risachan - 01-23-2012, 09:16 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-23-2012, 09:30 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by HumiliatioN - 01-23-2012, 11:19 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Risachan - 01-24-2012, 12:13 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Dynomite33 - 01-24-2012, 12:49 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-24-2012, 01:33 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Dark Knight - 01-24-2012, 02:51 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zico - 01-25-2012, 01:17 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-25-2012, 12:15 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zico - 01-25-2012, 08:13 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-25-2012, 09:07 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by TheShadowSythe - 01-26-2012, 02:12 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by lizard lips - 01-26-2012, 02:52 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-26-2012, 12:44 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zico - 01-26-2012, 07:25 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Unearthlybrutal - 01-26-2012, 07:29 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-28-2012, 12:02 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Unearthlybrutal - 01-28-2012, 01:05 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 01-29-2012, 03:45 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by iCame4TheGame - 03-16-2012, 05:55 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 03-17-2012, 03:27 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Zenix - 03-29-2012, 06:25 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by Kitsuna020 - 04-01-2012, 08:14 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by blakeman909 - 12-30-2012, 09:47 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by FlawlessHappiness - 12-31-2012, 11:27 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by 343 - 01-03-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 03-08-2013, 07:04 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by ThoseRandomGuyz - 03-08-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: Oblivion: Drops Of Wine - by zeexto - 03-10-2013, 05:42 PM



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