What do you think of my custom story ideas?

[CorinthianMerchant]

What do you think of my custom story ideas?


The CryptWIP)

Sounds interesting. Keep it.


The Man MachineWIP)

The main chunk of the text seem to describe something other than "the main story". Drop it.


Memoria Integra IacturaWIP)

The "no memory" story has been done one time too many :> Drop it.


The Mummy's Revenge(In planning)


Sounds like a certain movie Might work though! keep.


Descendit (In Planning):

Might be good as well. Keep.

The Star of Africa (In planning):

Amnesia the dark descent? Drop it.


Many of my stories will feature new entities, enemies, static objects, sounds and such.

My two cents. I would also suggest that you focus on doing one story at a time. Since you are new; I don't think you will be learning thrice as fast, they stories will just come out thrice as crappy.

Making custom stories is like having sex: the first one will most likely be awkward and a little bit rushed. After a few times you'll get the hang of it though

Could you specify why you think I should drop The Star of Africa?