ScaryHouse

[ThePatoAS]

Can you put a link in mediafire? c:

Ye ofc

Thanks i'll try it


I You are gonna play this don't read this

Spoiler below!

So.. i played your story and just by the name i thinked that it will have a lot of scary JumpScare but you surprised me...
Normally they make JumpScare map with Teleporting Naked Guys BUT you used monsters...

you didn't scared me too much... just with that brute coming out of the dresser...
In this story there are too much dresser and Statues... But TOO MANY KEYS!
You could use a Crowbar a Hollow Needle Hammer Chiller etc...
including in the story there where keys called ''Room Key2'' and ''Door Key3'' but there weren't a Door Key2 and a Door Key

That Teleporting Naked Guy jumped too slow and it didn't screamed

The Keys were like ALWAYS In the same place
(1st Key=Dresser)
2nd Key=Dresser
3rd Key=Dresser
4 Key= well that was in a Display...
5 Key= Dresser
6 Key=Iron Maiden
7 Key=top of the bed)

i founded the keys in seconds they were in very recurrent places...

i found a bad weird that i was in a castle and then suddendly a room with an iron maiden

Well it wasn't bad for being your first custom Story i would give it a... 5/10

Some JumpScares were good, mapping was a bit repeated from other rooms