Can someone take a look?

[Cranky Old Man]

First of all, it's "void", not "Void".

Second of all, wtf is this?

void SetEntityActive(string& asName, bool abActive);(string &in asParent, string &in asChild, int alState)

I mean, what were you even trying to do here? Change an already existing function and then just add some additional parameters because they looked nice?

Understand what you're doing. That's my solution.

"Understand what you're doing. That's my solution."

Well I ask for help to get a better understanding of what I am doing.

and

"void SetEntityActive(string& asName, bool abActive);(string &in asParent, string &in asChild, int alState)"

must have gotten jumbled up with something else when I was deleting something else. And I think it looks very nice! Thank you for thinking so too!

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