Game crashed on specific custom story map... (Please help!

[FlawlessHappiness]

You have different lines where they end with ) ;
This looks wrong since there should be no space between them... Though i don't know if this fixes it.

Instead of giving us the error log, could you tell us what happens when the game crashes?

There must be some kind of error.
If it's the blackbox it's probably not the script that is the problem.

If it's a warning box saying, Unexpected end of file, or something else, then show us that.