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I made a little "sketch" description for my custom story, so I need someone to improve it a little, so it would turn out to be a more proper one to my liking.
Don't even know is this any good myself, so I think it's better to give someone more experienced take a look.

Spoiler below!

During Harrys abscence, fatal incomprehensible events, shape the Blackburgs castle and give it a new unknown form, like she has never been before.
All daily bustle ends, as her crew vanishes mysteriously and halls turns death silent slowly. The mansion literally turns upside down as its own opposite, from cheerful vivid to dull dead.

The sudden stop of daily contact, worries Harry sick and turns well deserved holiday around, making him decide and head back home, only to find out that he has missed much, maybe even too much...

Thanks in advance.

Needs deeper themes. Right now the mod just sounds like a typical castle horror story.

Right you are, the description must sound typical, but the overall plot, as it proceeds, changes its direction pretty radically. I kind of try to hide it, give it more as a surprise, that opens unexpectedly in front the player.