SCP HAZARDOUS [Beta Testing At June 1TH!]

[SSEAlexander]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezcfSfrN...e=youtu.be
You should give me critism and serious help.Took me an hour to convert,add two videos in one and share on youtube.
Tell me what u think first and then tell me what should be changed/fixed.
And peoples like :
Lazzar
Badcat5500
SomethingisRidicoulus
Niksonix
Juras
can critize.Because they are one of best CS creators and they know what to do.

There's some problems.
One is your lighting. I suspect you use one big giant pointlight. You should add smaller pointlights throughout to emulate real life.
Two is your mapping. I can see seams and the pixels. And the forest map makes me cringe.
Three is your detailing. Some of the maps seem really empty. It makes the environment boring.
Four is your grammar. It still looks bad to read.

But your mapping and scripting has improved well. Oh and by the way, it's SomethingRidiculous. And I haven't make any CS', although I do have one in development. Been at it for a long time.

EDIT:
I agree with Lazzer. Everyone should have the right to criticize other people since there are always people better.

Hmm....What about the first map? Does not use big pointlight.It uses few small.
And,Where u seen the pixels? Oh,By the way,Im playing on lowest settings.that can explain that all.
And yea,I didnt actually take care of mapping in Apocalypse.I just placed few empty rooms.Ill try to fix the hallways and other things.
grammar? I didnt seen a bug in text.
And,
I wanted only to make BEST people critize me.Because they can give me serious help.