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Testers for my custom story needed!
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RE: Testers for my custom story needed!

Some of my critique:

Spoiler below!

- Well, it's certainly pitchblack.
- Too many lamps even though they are off.
- Too many rugs.
- Obvious PDP-reference.
- Tile amount, too high. (planes).
- Lacking structure. There's too many different rooms in the same area.
- Copy-pasted bookshelves never look good.
- The bathroom sink is in head-height.
- Decals where art thou?
- Cellarbase needs welders between walls.
- Seweroutlets in the cellar? No wonder the place is flooded.

I think that's enough for now.


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Testers for my custom story needed! - by ShadowTV - 06-23-2014, 04:02 PM
RE: Testers for my custom story needed! - by i3670 - 06-23-2014, 09:59 PM
RE: Testers for my custom story needed! - by AGP - 06-24-2014, 12:47 AM



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